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Post by Valyn on Dec 23, 2003 10:36:07 GMT -5
Bit of something I wrote a long time ago, when school was really sucking.
They laugh They look at me They whisper behind their hands (If they're polite) And talk out loud if they aren't They think I'm deaf Or they want me to hear Like I care what they think
I walk down the hall Most will ignore me I'm just a guy Just an ordinary guy But the ones that laugh They point at me They whisper They talk They shout, sometimes (If they think I can't hear)
And what's with them anyway Is it really that Funny? Am I a human or a joke told by some Late-night comedian Who's too dumb to get a job So he entertains people by Being mindlessly mean Just an adult A grown-up version Of a high-school Middle-school Elementary Theme .
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Post by HeraldMage on Dec 23, 2003 21:43:30 GMT -5
Lots of feeling. I've never really cared for angsty poems, but that one's pretty decent. Sounds like you were having a pretty bad time of it. When was this?
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Post by Valyn on Dec 26, 2003 16:59:40 GMT -5
Near the end of last year (Yeah, I *just* found it. Organized, huh?) after that whole mess with You-Know-Who.
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Post by Edgiko on Mar 3, 2004 17:32:49 GMT -5
That was very good. I really loved it and understand were you are coming from considering in elemertery school *even now..though I've gotten BETTER* they would poke fun at me just to see my anger at laugh. I still have no idea how some one yelling and attacking you is "funny?"
I'm sorry about last year..even though I have no idea what you're talking about.
As for organization..heck we all find random poem dabbles that we wrote years ago. ^_^ Okay...I'm a slob..happy? ^_^
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Post by HeraldMage on Mar 5, 2004 16:30:03 GMT -5
I didn't have it as bad in elementary school... since I was bigger than everyone else then, I could just crack my knuckles and look threatening, and they'd stop laughing. It only got bad for me after I got to the age where a) other kids were catching up on me and b) fighting it out just wasn't generally acceptable anymore.
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Post by Kanae on Jul 1, 2004 11:53:36 GMT -5
So violent, HMage. So very violent. Prolly the reason we're friends, ne?
Anyway, I hear you, man. (I don't even know what the situation was, but I hear ya.) Life can be rough.
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